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Lay on Me

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Watching the rain fall
each raindrop slowly follows us
outlining our reflection

The path of each drop caressing me
you holding my waist gently guiding me
taking me back to where you had me
taking me back to our bed.

You laid me down in a bed of need
closed my eyes
and allowed me to see through your touch
and my feelings

You craved me
so I gave myself to you.

The rain picks up and so did we
breathing
thumping
dripping
wet
Rain

We stop to admire
I the rain
You me

I wonder what the rain can see?
If each drop has a small window of time where they live their full life before they’re absorbed by the earth again,
like us?
you entertained me and smiled
softly whispered
Probably

That night a storm brewed
the wind picked up
the rain fell harder
you held me tight
my need for you now matching yours
I love you.

Gabriela A Tejada

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My name is Gabriela A Tejada aka The Astronomical Poet. © Gabriela A Tejada and Onceuponatimeidreamt, 2015-2019. Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Gabriela A. Tejada ( Astronomicalpoet) and onceuponatimeidreamt with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

14 Comments Add yours

  1. southernwriter122051046 says:
    January 28, 2019 at 10:50 AM

    Beautiful words and photography!

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    1. TheAstronomicalPoet says:
      January 28, 2019 at 5:11 PM

      Thank you!🌙

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  2. lynyo says:
    January 28, 2019 at 10:51 AM

    Your words are like rain, beautiful, powerful and inspiring! Thanks for sharing

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    1. TheAstronomicalPoet says:
      January 28, 2019 at 5:12 PM

      Such beautiful words!! Thank you ❤ 🌙

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      1. lynyo says:
        January 28, 2019 at 5:21 PM

        Welcome!

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  3. Angela says:
    January 28, 2019 at 3:00 PM

    Beautiful!!

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    1. TheAstronomicalPoet says:
      January 28, 2019 at 5:10 PM

      Thank you!! 🌙

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      1. Angela says:
        January 28, 2019 at 5:24 PM

        Myn

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      2. Angela says:
        January 28, 2019 at 5:24 PM

        Oops…..My pleasure.

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  4. bluebellrizzifaw says:
    January 29, 2019 at 10:05 AM

    Beautiful ♡o♡

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    1. TheAstronomicalPoet says:
      January 29, 2019 at 10:45 AM

      Thank you 🌙

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      1. bluebellrizzifaw says:
        January 29, 2019 at 10:52 AM

        You’re welcome! ^ ^

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  5. braedenmichaels says:
    February 5, 2019 at 6:28 PM

    Lovely poem

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    1. TheAstronomicalPoet says:
      March 4, 2019 at 11:02 PM

      Thank you😊🌙

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